This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 26; the 26th Edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The topic for this month is 'ThAt LAsT NiGhT'.
Fun!
Night outs and Bachelor Parties are always cherished as fun! One must stay within the limits when consuming alcohol or any other drugs in order to escape from getting into any troubles. I did a very big mistake Last Night; yes, I consumed drug and alcohol to the extreme limit in the name of FUN.
Fate!
Fate plays an important role in one’s life. It can help one to fly high out of blues or put one down from the hilltop. Sometime when one makes a mistake then he/she can never afford to correct it in future. I did a very big crime Last Night; I cannot call it as FATE.
Crime!
Last Night after the party, I was driving back to home. My fate, I somehow lost my control, dashed on the footpath, rolled upside down and broke into block walls of nearby house. Luckily, I managed to come out of the car with minor injuries but when I came out, I saw him dead, CRIME.
| video courtesy : You tube |
The post, “The crime that happened LAsT NiGhT” is a result of tears and the effect of watching the heart wrenching video. My sincere request is “Never Drink and Drive”, please. Share the post or at least the video if you really care for someone, and please never drink and drive, please.
PS: The above post is composed of three 55’s in which first two stands on its own with an element of surprise and the third one connects the two with an ending. This is the second time I’m trying this form (3 55's), I hope it has come out well. Do leave your footprints!
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"முகமறியா நண்பர்களின் கருத்துக்களே எனக்கு படிகற்கள்"
I don't know whether this incident is real or just a narrated story...but it was really shocking...as if the whole incident came in front of my eyes... :)
ReplyDeleteas for the 55's part...it was amazing...never felt like it was your 2nd attempt... :)
Your wild imagination at work!
ReplyDeleteThat last indeed was somehow frightening! Coming out alive is really a miracle!
Sis, good take on the prompt, short but full of emotions!
Good luck!
Amity
Damn...That is very shocking. I wish people never drink, drive too for that matter:(
ReplyDeletea gud message at the end
ReplyDeleteAnd ur way of putting it in 3 55fs was a novel way of putting it
Atb
Common fiction theme in blogosphere - drunk driving. But refreshing presentation. This is the first time I've read a "3-55s". Liked it. :)
ReplyDeleteWas this real?? Reminded me of the guy I hit with my car 4 years ago, for no mistake of mine :( I was expecting a detective story, marked with your superb research skills...All the best for B-A-T.
ReplyDeletePeople do commit the same mistake .. and innocent get killed .. hope this changes at the earliest! Good effort to combine 2 F 55s to give a solid social message.
ReplyDeleteSiS, this by means looked like your second attempt at 55's.
ReplyDeleteGood work.
Crisp!
Short!
Social!
Worthy!
Good luck :)
Short but a powerful post!
ReplyDeleteCreatively done! :)
really amazing clear impact post. complete mind turner is all I can say can say.
ReplyDeleteSiS, this by no means looked like your second attempt at 55's.
ReplyDeleteGood work.
Crisp!
Short!
Social!
Worthy!
Good luck :)
P.S: I missed out writing "no" in my prev comment!
Well written 55 fictions conveying a really important message.
ReplyDeleteA very good message. And a nice experimentation with 3 55 fictions....
ReplyDeleteHello SiS :).
ReplyDeleteThis is the first time I'm visiting your blog and I must say I am very impressed ;). I can't believe I haven't been here before :O.
Now coming to the post. It is an extremely touchy post :). And no one would believe that it is just your second attempt.
You have brought out a sensitive topic in an awesome way.
Its very lovely :).
The video brought tears to my eyes :(. So sad. Poor boy and the family.
I really do wish people would stop driving when they are drunk..
You have addressed this serious issue in a nice novel way. Innovative.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully penned. It is something all must understand. Great message sent across.
ReplyDeleteI really admire the treatment. 55 is most difficult to write and you have done it superbly in all three...
ReplyDeleteYou have conveyed an imp message thru this short story.. nice take on the prompt.. do read mine and let me know how is it..
ReplyDeleteThe addition of the video and the social message that you passed on is worthy of applause. :)
ReplyDeleteAll the best for BAT!
truly a point to prove ^_^ gud 1 bro :) \m/ ATB
ReplyDeleteoopsy i was signed in the wrong id -_- :P
ReplyDeletetruly a point to prove ^_^ gud 1 bro :) \m/ ATB
Wow! That's very innovative. Using the video was a terrific idea.
ReplyDeleteI didn't realize the theme until you said it toward the end... and I was like ohhh..
Gr8 attempt buddy. The message's been passed too. Great job.
Good luck.
Omg!!...was that real???? ..It gives me goose bumps!!! ....
ReplyDeletegreat message conveyed through three 55 fiction!! ...message with creativity! ..liked it a lot!! ...and the video acted as a cherry on the icing!! ...giving it a very good summation!!!! :D:D:D:D
all the best!
@ CYNOSURE
ReplyDeleteI don't know whether this incident is real or just a narrated story...but it was really shocking...as if the whole incident came in front of my eyes... :)
as for the 55's part...it was amazing...never felt like it was your 2nd attempt... :)
Cynosure, there are many many true incidents happened like this.. I thought bringing it out will at least open one closed eyes.. Hope it came out well.. PS: This the second time I'm writing three 55's form :-)
@ Punam
ReplyDelete:(
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:-(
@ Amity
ReplyDeleteYour wild imagination at work!
That last indeed was somehow frightening! Coming out alive is really a miracle!
Sis, good take on the prompt, short but full of emotions!
Good luck!
Amity
Amity, Coming out alive is a miracle but he killed a kid.. If I'm there I would kill him..
@ Cloud Nine
ReplyDeleteDamn...That is very shocking. I wish people never drink, drive too for that matter:(
CN I wish the same too..
@ Chetan
ReplyDeletea gud message at the end
And ur way of putting it in 3 55fs was a novel way of putting it
Atb
thank you so much Chetan.. Happy to read your words.. :-)
@ Chicky a.k.a. Kaddu
ReplyDeleteCommon fiction theme in blogosphere - drunk driving. But refreshing presentation. This is the first time I've read a "3-55s". Liked it. :)
I'm sorry to disappoint you.. It may be a common theme but very important issue that needs to be addressed.. Moreover this is the first time I'm writing about this issue.. Thanks for your sweet words.. Smiles...
@ Shilpa Nair
ReplyDeleteWas this real?? Reminded me of the guy I hit with my car 4 years ago, for no mistake of mine :( I was expecting a detective story, marked with your superb research skills...All the best for B-A-T.
A fiction.. inspired by the video Shilpa.. And sorry to disappoint you.. Maybe next time I will write a big detective story.. what say?
@ aativas
ReplyDeletePeople do commit the same mistake .. and innocent get killed .. hope this changes at the earliest! Good effort to combine 2 F 55s to give a solid social message.
I too hope the same.. Smiles..
@ Animesh Ganguly
ReplyDeleteSiS, this by means looked like your second attempt at 55's.
Good work.
Crisp!
Short!
Social!
Worthy!
Good luck :)
I got you bro.. I know you missed the NO... Thanks for your sweet words..
@ Simran
ReplyDeleteShort but a powerful post!
Creatively done! :)
Thank you so much little one.. I'm happy!
@ pramod
ReplyDeletereally amazing clear impact post. complete mind turner is all I can say can say.
Thank you so much Pramodji.. Happy to see you here.. Smiles..
@ Animesh Ganguly
ReplyDeleteSiS, this by no means looked like your second attempt at 55's.
Good work.
Crisp!
Short!
Social!
Worthy!
Good luck :)
P.S: I missed out writing "no" in my prev comment!
Smiles...
@ The Fool
ReplyDeleteWell written 55 fictions conveying a really important message.
Thank you so much TF.. It means a lot to me..
@ Vikram Pyati
ReplyDeleteA very good message. And a nice experimentation with 3 55 fictions....
Thank you so much Vikram.. Happy to read your exciting words..
@ Princess Poo
ReplyDeleteHello SiS :).
This is the first time I'm visiting your blog and I must say I am very impressed ;). I can't believe I haven't been here before :O.
Now coming to the post. It is an extremely touchy post :). And no one would believe that it is just your second attempt.
You have brought out a sensitive topic in an awesome way.
Its very lovely :).
The video brought tears to my eyes :(. So sad. Poor boy and the family.
I really do wish people would stop driving when they are drunk..
Hi Princess Poo..
Welcome to Few Miles.. I'm so so glad to read your encouraging words.. I am flying.. may be on Cloud nine.. Happy.... Thank you so much.. I'm visiting your blog right away..
It is a great video and I wish the same.. :-)
@ lIl hIgH
ReplyDeleteYou have addressed this serious issue in a nice novel way. Innovative.
Happy to read your encouraging words.. Thank you so much..
@ jojofeelings
ReplyDeleteBeautifully penned. It is something all must understand. Great message sent across.
Thank you so much.. Yes, everyone must understand.. or else world will be leading to hell..
@ Saru Singhal
ReplyDeleteI really admire the treatment. 55 is most difficult to write and you have done it superbly in all three...
Saru, thank you so much.. your words mean a lot to me.. thanks..
@ RaNiiiiii
ReplyDeleteYou have conveyed an imp message thru this short story.. nice take on the prompt.. do read mine and let me know how is it..
Varsha, glad to have you here.. Sure I shall read your post and let you know my thoughts...
@ Enchanta
ReplyDeleteThe addition of the video and the social message that you passed on is worthy of applause. :)
All the best for BAT!
Thank you so much Enchanta.. I think this is the first time I'm applauded by you.. Happy!
@ Sankar
ReplyDeletetruly a point to prove ^_^ gud 1 bro :) \m/ ATB
Thank you so much Sankar.. Happy Man..
@ Sankar Shaji
ReplyDeleteoopsy i was signed in the wrong id -_- :P
truly a point to prove ^_^ gud 1 bro :) \m/ ATB
:-)
@ Kshitij
ReplyDeleteWow! That's very innovative. Using the video was a terrific idea.
I didn't realize the theme until you said it toward the end... and I was like ohhh..
Gr8 attempt buddy. The message's been passed too. Great job.
Good luck.
Welcome back! glad to read your encouraging words.. I'm really really happy.. Thank you so much..
@ ashzzes
ReplyDeleteOmg!!...was that real???? ..It gives me goose bumps!!! ....
great message conveyed through three 55 fiction!! ...message with creativity! ..liked it a lot!! ...and the video acted as a cherry on the icing!! ...giving it a very good summation!!!! :D:D:D:D
all the best!
Thank you so much ashzzes.. I'm flying.. Happy!!!!!!!!!!
In so few words, so much conveyed...a story, a moral and a message. A very different take on the topic. Loved the style. All the best.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the appreciation for my post...all I can say is that it was a spontaneous flow of words from a grieving heart.
@ Cherry Blossom
ReplyDeleteThank you so much CB.. Happy to read yours..